You can write what a character is thinking in a script using parentheticals.
Parentheticals are brief descriptions enclosed in parentheses that provide information about a character's actions, emotions, or thoughts.
They are placed directly after the character's name and before the dialogue.
Here are some examples:
- (Thinking)
- (To himself)
- (Confused)
- (Smiling)
Here is an example of how to use parentheticals in a script:
[SCENE START]
INT. COFFEE SHOP - DAY
JOHN (20s) sits at a table, staring at his phone. He looks up as ANNA (20s) approaches.
ANNA
Hey John!
JOHN
(Startled)
Oh, hey Anna!
ANNA
(Smiling)
What are you looking at?
JOHN
(Hesitates)
Just... some stuff.
ANNA
(Raises an eyebrow)
Anything interesting?
JOHN
(Nervously)
Not really.
[SCENE END]In this example, the parentheticals provide insight into John's thoughts and feelings.
They help the reader understand his internal state, even though he doesn't explicitly say what he is thinking.
Remember these important points:
- Keep parentheticals brief and to the point.
- Avoid using too many parentheticals, as they can clutter the script.
- Use parentheticals sparingly, only when necessary to convey important information.
